Weak Points:

  • Overall, the resume looks unprofessional: the texts are not aligned properly, the wording can be improved, the layout is poorly done and many sections can be completely rearranged.
  • Included work experience is not relevant to the target job.
  • The applicant may convey the wrong image of themselves to an employer - the resume conveys either the applicant's dissatisfaction with their former jobs or the possible dissatisfaction of former employers due to the inclusion of short time gaps between jobs.
  • I would highly recommend a subtle change to the employment gaps - adding possible volunteer activities or membership in interest groups in between jobs.
  • Would definitely suggest that the individual briefly mentions the cause of the short time gaps to diffuse any employer doubts. Any other details can be discussed during an interview.
Strong Points:
  • Solid educational background included
  • Relevant work experience as pre-school teacher highlighted


  • Align the text of the resume to create a clean, polished and professional appeal.
  • Include only relevant experience to the targeted job position and remove job positions that are not.
  • Limit the resume to only one page.
  • Rephrase the text in the objective to make it sound more natural and fluid.
  • Completely reformat the entire resume and possibly use another template.

The sample is applicable as:

Child Care Instructor Resume Sample

Child Care Instructor Resume Sample

The sample is applicable as:

  • Pre-school Teacher professional resume
  • Kindergarten Teacher professional resume
  • Early Childhood Teacher professional resume
  • Daycare Teacher professional resume
  • Child Care Instructor professional resume

Recruiter’s comment:

Weak Points:

  • Resume looks unprofessional, text are not aligned.
  • There are a lot of work experiences not relevant to the job he is applying.
  • He seems to be dissatisfied with his job that he transfers to a new one every year or every 2-3 months.

Strong Points:

  • Good education background
  • Relevant work experience as pre-school teacher


  • Align the text of the resume to create a clean look.
  • Include only the relevant experience; remove work positions that are not related to the job applying.
  • Limit the resume to one page only.
  • Rephrase the wordings in the objective.

Employers that may be interested:

  • Pre-Kindergarten Lead Teacher – Naples Preschool Academy
  • Classroom Teacher, Early Childhood – Durham Nockamixon Elementary school
  • Classroom Teacher, Early Childhood – DelaSalle Education Center
  • Early Preschool Teacher / Support Teacher – Primrose School at Pinnacle


The candidate has relevant education with a degree in Bachelor of Applied Science Major in Early Childhood. He has experience working as a preschool teacher.