





Sandy
CPRW
Weak Points:
- Overall, the resume looks unprofessional: the texts are not aligned properly, the wording can be improved, the layout is poorly done and many sections can be completely rearranged.
- Included work experience is not relevant to the target job.
- The applicant may convey the wrong image of themselves to an employer - the resume conveys either the applicant's dissatisfaction with their former jobs or the possible dissatisfaction of former employers due to the inclusion of short time gaps between jobs.
- I would highly recommend a subtle change to the employment gaps - adding possible volunteer activities or membership in interest groups in between jobs.
- Would definitely suggest that the individual briefly mentions the cause of the short time gaps to diffuse any employer doubts. Any other details can be discussed during an interview.
- Solid educational background included
- Relevant work experience as pre-school teacher highlighted
Recommendations:
- Align the text of the resume to create a clean, polished and professional appeal.
- Include only relevant experience to the targeted job position and remove job positions that are not.
- Limit the resume to only one page.
- Rephrase the text in the objective to make it sound more natural and fluid.
- Completely reformat the entire resume and possibly use another template.
The sample is applicable as:
The sample is applicable as:
- Pre-school Teacher professional resume
- Kindergarten Teacher professional resume
- Early Childhood Teacher professional resume
- Daycare Teacher professional resume
- Child Care Instructor professional resume
Recruiter’s comment:
Weak Points:
- Resume looks unprofessional, text are not aligned.
- There are a lot of work experiences not relevant to the job he is applying.
- He seems to be dissatisfied with his job that he transfers to a new one every year or every 2-3 months.
Strong Points:
- Good education background
- Relevant work experience as pre-school teacher
Recommendation:
- Align the text of the resume to create a clean look.
- Include only the relevant experience; remove work positions that are not related to the job applying.
- Limit the resume to one page only.
- Rephrase the wordings in the objective.
Employers that may be interested:
- Pre-Kindergarten Lead Teacher – Naples Preschool Academy
- Preschool Teacher – COASTAL COMMUNITY PRESCHOOL
- Classroom Teacher, Early Childhood – Durham Nockamixon Elementary school
- Classroom Teacher, Early Childhood – DelaSalle Education Center
- Early Preschool Teacher / Support Teacher – Primrose School at Pinnacle
Summary:
The candidate has relevant education with a degree in Bachelor of Applied Science Major in Early Childhood. He has experience working as a preschool teacher.
