William’s presentation of his resume is short and direct to point. I noticed though that he has listed the detailed description of the functions for the positions he held in Axtel and Emtell as accomplishments.
It is better to provide the work description under the work experience section. William may add a section under each function of his accomplishments. And in stating his accomplishments it would be helpful to include the strategies he has used to attain the goals. His profession summary is written in paragraph but after reading it I suggest to present it in the bullet points.
His field of expertise is in marketing. From his achievement of putting a new product in the position of market leader I would say that he is a creative person as he was able to get the targeted market.
Employers that may be interested:
- Manufacturing Companies that are consistently looking for new products to sell to the market
- Advertising and Marketing Companies (e.g. MediaCom)
