Wrong terms vs proper terms:
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How to write your career goals
We at Resume Writing Service have come up with a few samples of what and what not to write when stating your career goals in your resume. See the samples below:
Incorrect career goal
I have all the necessary skills that personnel working in nursing/medical fields require. I can work as a Head Nurse in any hospital or care-home. My practical experience is on a level that goes far beyond the expectations for this position. I believe I can work as a Head Nurse.
I can also be an instructor for health care education institutes as well, where I can share my experience and demonstrate the practicalities of health care provision. As an alternative, I can work either in the air force or armed forces, as I have a background in emergency care.
Strengths of my resume: Many years of dynamic work experience coupled with a solid academic background. This is a good attribute as employers seek to hire people who are going to stay for long term work periods. The resume is highly readable, concise and includes all relevant details necessary to make an accurate assessment of the candidate.
Weakness: There are almost no weaknesses in the resume. The resume is very professionally designed and and very informative.
Correct career goal
My multi-faceted and practical work experience in various institutions throughout the country coupled with a solid academic background will allow me to effectively manage staff in a hospital setting. I believe that the position as Head Nurse will allow be to make a productive contribution to your team. I have excellent communication, organizational and management skills. Working for a respected institution such as “Golden Hill Hospital” is my goal.
Employers that may be interested:
- Health Care Institutes
- Medical Colleges
- National Health Care Centers
- Armed Forces
- Air Force
Potential jobs you can apply to:
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