Resume Writing Service is always glad to help you to improve your resume and let it shine. And the first free service that we offer on the way to your perfect resume is resume critique. Our professional resume writers will carefully review your current resume and give you some tips on how to make it really outstanding! Here is a resume critique sample of one Business Consultant resume composed by our resume writer:
I’ve reviewed your resume and have some ideas and suggestions that I think will help make your resume more effective.
Please remember that I’m critiquing words on a piece of paper, not you or your skills. It’s my intention to find ways on how to turn those words into a document that showcases your skills, abilities, and talents so that you can land the position you want.
So, here it goes:
- The resume contains all the important information and it seems that you have a marketable experience and background but your resume needs attention in the areas of format, focus, structure, and presentation in order to present your experiences effectively.
- 5 pages are too many for a resume and would oftentimes bore the recruiter, 2-3 pages is the most acceptable number of pages.
- In your work experience section, you’ve listed everything with bullets. I suggest revising the format with a paragraph summarizing your general responsibilities and to avoid being redundant by having a separate section, which will solely highlight the management tools and environments applied for all work experience.
To give you an overview on how your resume will be further improved, here are just a few of my improvement plans:
- To edit, reorganize, and reformat the whole content and sub-headings. You may want your resume to look conservative yet using varying font sizes and an organized professional format can aid to make your resume look more alive and inviting to read.
- To improve the executive summary by rewriting the content and to add the areas of your expertise based on the content from the experiences section.
- The work experience section will also be improved through rewriting and reformatting of the contents.
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