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I’ve reviewed your resume and have some ideas and suggestions that I think will help make your resume more effective.
Please remember that I’m critiquing words on a piece of paper, not you or your skills. It’s my intention to find ways on how to turn those words into a document that showcases your skills, abilities, and talents so that you can land the position you want.
So, here it goes:
- The resume contains all the important information and it seems that you have a marketable experience and background but your resume needs attention in the areas of format, focus, structure, and presentation in order to present your experiences effectively.
- In your work experience section, you’ve listed everything with bullets. I suggest revising the format starting with a brief paragraph summarizing your general responsibilities, and ending with a bulleted list of other particular duties.
To give you an overview on how your resume will be further improved, here are just a few of my improvement plans:
- Edit, reorganize, and reformat the whole content. An organized professional format can aid to make your resume look more inviting to read.
- To add an executive summary section after the header and incorporating the content from the objective, profile and a summary of skills and expertise from the professional experience section.
- Quantified accomplishments are very important in a resume and they need to be showcased. I suggest adding a section entitled “Achievement Highlights” under the executive summary.
- The work experience section will also be improved through editing and reformatting of the contents.
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